Meet the Folks
By EB
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I wished I'd warned her
things were far from normal.
On arrival -
Curtains drawn. Bad sign.
'Mother... ?
Answer - silence!
'Son?'
'Father!'
Our formal handshake
left this girl, as others, baffled.
Not enough of the stuff of love
in our house.
Still, she kept her cool
as Mother wept; a clatter
of bones in the corner couch -
a dangerous heap that screeched
when I peeled a drape.
'Leave it!' it shouted - (the heap)
'They're out there!'
'Who's out there, Mother,' -
'The Devil', it babbled, 'and all
of his demons.
Shut the curtains -
I can't bear the light!' It flinched
and recoiled - arm thrown back,
theatrical -
called for The Mother of God,
who was away at Church.
Sunday.
Lunch was cold.
I watched the girl; meticulous;
chewing on rollmops - I later
found out she hated, and meat
swallowed down with water
and Mother's evils - pinned,
as she was, to the wall by the needles
of eyes made just for a son - the only
one - seen to be stolen.
I wished I had warned her
things were not normal.
Guess I was hoping they would be -
for once.
We stayed. We ate our lunch and left,
and all was well... Except
for Mother.
And Father.
And me, if I'm honest.
I shook my father's hand
a firm goodbye at the door,
and swore I heard The Devil
chuckle from behind the curtains...
But his name wasn't Satan,
it was Schizophrenia.
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What atmosphere
This builds and builds to that final crescendo. Killer last line of many fine preceeding ones.
Washing the flesh of those rollmops down was palpably awful - in the best way.
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So sad, so difficult to show
So sad, so difficult to show affection or understanding in such situations, and the visit has to be brief, and just attempt to show just that. Rhiannon
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I was really moved by this
I was really moved by this section in particular and the way the words pinned and needles and stolen and normal work together:
and Mother's evils - pinned,
as she was, to the wall by the needles
of eyes made just for a son - the only
one - seen to be stolen.
I wished I had warned her
things were not normal.
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The rollmops did for me, too.
The rollmops did for me, too. The situation is / was sad / difficult to deal with.
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