We Blink

By Ewan

Thu, 11 Feb 2016
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We stare at the future,

expect a mirror image

of our past.

 

We turn our head,

the əW in the mirror

unrecognised.

 

We shade our eyes.

Is the light behind us

tunnel-end or train?

 

 

Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Proper ending. Love the inverted we.

 

Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on

Good stuff, I like the economy/restraint involved in getting such effect from only a few words.  Also, of course, the inverted "we" is a nice touch.  And you've finished with a strong ending.