I'm Already There

Gold cherry

By Bee

Fri, 29 Apr 2016
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31 comments
 

We'll float in dusty shadows 

of your memories

as you rock me softly

in the bow of your reclining arm.



The hollow of your shoulder will cradle 

my inclining head, while our exploring

fingers gently brail affection

we are ever fearful to decry.



My leg curved angled at the knee

will drift somewhere toward your belt,

and I will whisper blissful

with your drumbeat in my ear,



where we will softly pass the tender ache

of night, and I'll be there -

in almost gladness of never having

had to leave complete, your broken heart.

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Comments

Submitted by airyfairy on

There is no comment that would do justice to this.  It's simply beautiful.

Submitted by Bee on

Such a lovely thing to say. Thank you, AF.

Bee

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Those last two lines are so full of meaning. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

I'm glad. Thanks Rhiannon.

Bee

Submitted by celticman on

'I'll be there', yes, you will. 

 

Submitted by Bee on

X

Bee

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I second what airyfairy said. Do you want this to go in your Journey section?

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks insert. No, I think I'll leave it for now. x

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks for the cherries. 

Bee

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Bee

Absolutely beautiful in composition and sentiment.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you so much, Jean.  That means a lot. 

Bee

Submitted by Starfish Girl on

Gentle and oh so loving. Beautiful words and sentiment.

Lindy

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks, Lindy. x

Bee

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

So tender, so gentle, beautiful.

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you Philip. X

Bee

Submitted by Ed Crane on

 

 

Submitted by Bee on

I'm glad you liked it, though, Ed. xx

Bee

Submitted by Shannan on

... will forever blossom and bloom in brightly coloured inspirational light for me... no dust...

Nestling and seeding to grow and cycle through an eternity of souls in the essence of a wind that carries the awe of freedom, love, poetry, strength, courage, hope and inspiration  ... 

Thank-you for each word you have published, each gift and moment you have shared. For gifting others with the blessing of soul connection without fear. 

Thank-you xxxxx

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you for your lovely comments, Shannan. 

Bee

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

This is so beautiful Bee, removed from all the physical stuff, gentle, wonderful..

 

Submitted by Bee on

I'm really pleased you thought so, thank you, Jane.

Bee

Submitted by VeraClark on

It reminds me of a grown up lullaby that you want to stay awake for. Really soft and enveloping. 

 

Submitted by Bee on

That's just lovely. Thank you, Vera x

Bee

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Such tender loving words in this poem Bee.

May you be enfolded in cherished, loving arms always.

I think Vera was spot on with her comment. My sentiments exactly.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you Jenny. 

Bee

Submitted by Denzella on

Dear Bee,

Feel proud!  Feel very proud!  You have such a gift and you generously share it with all of us who have been  following your painful journey.  Even, after all, you have been through your heart is still big enough and generous enough to share your thoughts in a way that only you can.

Always in my thoughts and prayers

Moya x  

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

This has always been one of my favourites of Bee's poems.  Planning a trip to the archives for the Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day, it came immediately to mind.  Please share/retweet if you've enjoyed it.   

Picture:  http://tinyurl.com/y8fpm5qq

Submitted by celticman on

drumbeat of words, ear and heart. 

 

Submitted by catherine poarch on

I read lots of Bee's poems and yet missed this absolute treasure, which is often the case when you nip on here when you can. This is so well written, so beautiful. It is like a song. I hope her family feel very proud to see it here again.

 

Submitted by Tipp Hex on

Simply delightful.

Tipp Hex

 

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