EBOLOWA 40

Cherry

By simonmiller15

Wed, 27 Apr 2016
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6 comments
 

A much revised version of EBOLOWA will be on sale in book shops and online at Unbound.com.

Details to follow as and when.

many thanks meantime to readers at ABC

and good luck.

simon

Certificate 18
Story
EBOLOWA
Historical Fiction
Drama
Crime

Comments

Submitted by celticman on

ah, old georges has a few tricks, poor candace. 

 

Submitted by simonmiller15 on

Jena pointed out that I have been maybe hitting the wrong button - - reply rather than comment - - but anyhow thanks for your comment.  It sounds as if you're not indifferent to what happens to Candace.  simon

Submitted by simonmiller15 on

thanks, nice reflection CM --- would you trust a guy with a pencil moustache?

Submitted by celticman on

well, I once said I didn't trust anyone called Emile, so I guess it comes into that catergory. 

 

Submitted by simonmiller15 on

Hi CM, yeah, but then there was always Zola.

Submitted by Sandy Hogarth on

Really good fast moving, tension.

Sentence - He too fast..... Would read better if you truned it around -' Slightly hunched....down to - took quick jerky strides.'  Jerky not jerking.

'It rattled in her hand'. Don't need trembling.