Delicate
By _Hayley_
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When she was born, she was light as a feather.
Her mother said she would grow to be one of those girls
who walked with effortless grace.
She’d have the body of a dancer,
so light on her feet that she’d barely leave a footprint.
When she was ten, she was kept on a tether
Her mother told her she had to be one of those girls
who always had a smile on her face.
She needed the body of a dancer,
so the other girls would think she’s beautiful.
When she was fifteen, she was light as a feather.
Her mother said she was one of those girls
who should get special care. Just in case.
She had the body of a dancer who’d been pushed too far
who seemed so frail she might snap.
When she was gone, no one came together.
Her mother said she was one of those girls
who walked with grace, a smile on her face.
She could have been a dancer, but instead
she walked so light she left no footprints.
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Beautifully done. The
Beautifully done. The repetition works really well. One to read aloud
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Lovely, light and so heavy
Lovely, light and so heavy with sadness.
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Brilliant and beautifully
Brilliant and beautifully expressed. There's so much pressure on girls and women to be a certain way, and it's not exclusively about physicality. There's all this you're too quiet...too loud...too dreamy...like different things...like a different gender...and it's got to stop.
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Yes this is clever and I like
Yes this is clever and I like the repetition and the progression. It works really well
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