Accidentally succeeding

Gold cherry

By Deliberately Evolving

Sat, 14 May 2016
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9 comments
 
Accidentally succeeding
It started with a series 
of unfortunate events, 
poor choices, mistakes, 
foolish reason on my part.
 
I was often led 
with a head full of dreams,
romantic ideals
barely smarter than my heart.
 
Friends gone, loves lost,
they weighed up the cost,
or just wouldn't 
give me a second glance.
 
Futile regrets, near misses,
pointless wishes
to undo all the errors,
start fresh - another chance.
 
Looking back I could feel 
that it's foolish and unreal 
and I could wonder
if I ever had a clue.
 
I don't want to change a thing,
don't begrudge the load I'm bearing,
I'm pleased because 
my journey's led to you.
 
I know you feel regrets
and have wishes unfulfilled,
the life you're living now
not what you had dreamed.
 
But this series of events,
as unfortunate as they seem, 
praise fate because 
they've led you straight to me.
 
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Comments

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks for the cherries admin.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Great voice. Resolves really nicely.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks PT! smiley

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This has a really lovely rhythm to it - well done

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks insert, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by VeraClark on

The rhyme feels really therapeutic, a circle of events turned good.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Vera - I'm pleased you enjoyed it. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by jolono on

This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick Of The day.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

That's so cool! I wasn't expecting that!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.