We Splashed

By Richard L. Provencher

Wed, 17 Aug 2016
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We Splashed

 

in the puddles, little pools

threatening to catch mother’s attention

when we gathered home and

left splotches of mud

mash on shiny floors meant

for clean socks and kneeling low

to play checkers.

 

But then, it was okay

with laughter and “Look at you!”

ringing in our ears as we

continued with our laughter

and jostling to be first to reach

momma’s surrounding arms

and receive a kiss from her loving ways.

 

(c) 2016 Richard L. Provencher

Certificate U
Poem
More Than Words years 2016+
Biography

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Lovely picture and incident captured. Especially liked the  'shiny floors meant for clean socks and kneeling low to play checkers.'

Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

You always leave such encouraging remarks, and I thank you for that. We just underwent a heavy downpour, almost 40 mm in an hour. Phew. Just three days ago, no one was allowed to enter the woods due to dryness

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

Very nice, sweet, rhythmic, bubbling lively word choice/ combinations projecting the content really effectively - liked 'splotches of mud mash on shiny floors', good work

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you, Stephen, for your bubbly comment -- so nice to read such encouragment first thing in the morning.

Richard L. Provencher