Cherry St. Sours (Poetry Monthly)
By Philip Sidney
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Sherbet sunset fizzes into a blurry rainbow of e-numbers
over the diesel scented city-scape
sink into the lullaby of matt-chalk smog
be my bed tonight buzzing sky
it’s damp beside the sour bin-liners
bone against oil tin skinning-up to take the metal out of the edge
too much silver in cars today
sweet colour leaks into the sky and is blown away
leaving the wrappings behind
I long to lick the Opal Fruit of a lemon Citroen
or suck on the pink nose of a tart tram
machines growl through the furry streets
gobstopper eye balls roll after them
from the cold greasy-green of the hollows
clickity-clack dares to dance on the coiled pavement
as night swallows the last tender drop of comfort.
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I love this. It feels like a
I love this. It feels like a taste sensation. Brilliantly expressed colours and sensory undermining.
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Hi Helen
Hi Helen
This is such fun to read and almost taste. I like all the hyphenated words working into the rhyme.
Jean
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This sensory explosion is our
This sensory explosion is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.
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yum-yum this poem fizzes
yum-yum this poem fizzes along and tastes wonderful.
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electric piece, the
electric piece, the imaginative original compounds used throughout are a wonderfully effective stylistic choice, and the lively onomatopoeia, sharp p,g, z sounds and rolling l's lift it from the page (screen!) Cracking work
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