Mynydd Troed
By Rhiannonw
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(Munith - [hard ’th’] Troeed), Black Mountains
Open access hillside – mind
it isn’t easy ways to find
through the swathes of bracken cladding
– will we find a channel mown,
not yet wholly overgrown?
boggy gullies aren’t inviting,
bilberry tussocks deep can trip,
careless trudging foot can slip,
grassy slope is very steep –
easier now to crawl and creep,
find at last the pathway-stair…
soon atop the ridge, see where
the lake lies on the other side,
and tower above views far and wide.
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Sounds (and looks) absolutely
Sounds (and looks) absolutely stunning!
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Nothing better than sitting,
Nothing better than sitting, picking and eating a fresh billberry or two.
I like the feel of escapism this creates, yes hard work - but what a sense of freedom and the thrill of making it when you reach the top, 'freshness' also sprang to mind - the feel of pure air.
Much enjoyed.
Pops ~xx~
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The challenges underfoot make
The challenges underfoot make the process all the more satisfying . Love the idea of bracken as cladding and the anticipation your words build of of the view over the other side.
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A stunning poem that captured
A stunning poem that captured all the senses in every way. The views at the end must have been worth all the struggle to get there.
Was it your birthday treat? If so happy birthday for last Saturday.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
It looks like the end result was worth the effort involved in the walk. It looks a lovely place.
Jean
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This has the feel of walking,
This has the feel of walking, a bit of a struggle. How have you done that? And then the last line I can feel that you have stopped. Is it the long sound of the vowels in "towers" "view" "far" "wide" gives the sense of space? Treating words like musical notes you are
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Oh, you are Welsh? Am trying
Oh, you are Welsh? Am trying to understand why Welsh poetry is so beautiful, even when can't understand it, like Dylan Thomas, all the sounds. Please, could you recommend a book that explains (in English)? I've tried and tried to find stuff online. I notice most of my favourite poets are Welsh or (Gerard Manley Hopkins) influenced by Welsh poetry
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Thankyou, I will! I am
Thankyou, I will! I am terrible at languages, so I don't think I will ever be able to read Welsh. But maybe this would be a goal to work towards. One of my grandmothers (who I never met) was Welsh borders
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