Moon-Tan Lotion

Cherry

By Ewan

Fri, 06 Oct 2017
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So bright, last night, the
yellow-orange harvest moon:
we lay moon-bathing.

The birds were sleeping
there were no owls on duty:
silence as music.

And in the morning
it was peeping through the trees
at we early birds.

The moon-tan lotion
saved us from moonstroke, the moon
had got the blisters.
 

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Lovers, Liars and Just Good Friends.
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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

There's a dreamy feeling about this poem and I love the fact it reads better when listening to Harvest Moon.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Ewan on

hope you tried it. Thanks for taking in a little moonshine with me.

best

Ewan

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Submitted by airyfairy on

Shine on indeed.  I love the idea of moon bathing.  It would be something else to worry my neighbours.

Submitted by Ewan on

you sound like a perfectly good neighbour to me, but then my neighbours don't care for me much.

Ewan x

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

There's something otherworldly about moonlight isn't there 

 

Submitted by Ewan on

is something special about moonlight. It's true.

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Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Lovely and gently humorous.