Man With A Plan

By skinner_jennifer

Wed, 11 Oct 2017
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17 comments
 

Sometimes out

of bad situations

new conditions

can arise –

 

like a phoenix from

out of ashes lifts,

darkness can be

replaced by wink of light.

 

Dad remember

not long after

elm was cut down,

you came up with a plan;

 

a dream to create a glade shady,

away from daily noisy din,

just outside back gate with sun

beating down you carried on,

 

rich earth there was plenty

with fork – hoe and spade,

establishing desired effect

measured with string,

 

told yourself it's all worth while,

showed no sign of slowing down.

Daydreams you had so many

sitting in your bit of paradise,

 

sweeping back those cobwebs

of indecision, leaving life's

problems far behind, you

were always a man with a plan.

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Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

What a lovely memoir!

Submitted by celticman on

it's good to have a plan, but ...can't say I have. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

So there was a happy memory after the loss of the Elm! Not just the created glade but the memory of your father's enjoyment of the project. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

A beautiful eulogy. My Dad always had plans too, so much energy. Your poem brought this back, thankyou

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Glad you liked Helen and thank you for letting me know.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Dad was a builder by trade and loved creating new things, he wouldn't stop till he'd finished, I really don't know where he got all his energy from.

Thank you for stopping by and reading and letting me know your thoughts Jack.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon, my dad was someone who could turn his hand to most things and loved creating. I do miss him and mum a lot even now, especially at this time of year, when thoughts turn to loved ones.

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

October is when I like to remember mum and dad, with thoughts of Samhain on the horizon. Remembering their achievements.

Your dad must have been special too with all his energy. I'm glad I could stir his memory for you.

It was good to hear your thoughts Di_Hard and thank you for reading.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

Very pretty... had a nice flow...seemed to settle into a lilting rhythm around 'a dream to create a glade' line which worked well after the opening thoughts... Lovely images and great control/word economy... much enjoyed :)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I appreciate you stopping by to read Stephen. Your comment is more than welcome and glad you enjoyed.

Many thanks.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Shannan on

I love the winking sun ...
Hope you are well.
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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there Shannan,

thank you for reading and glad you liked that line. wink

I'm well, hope you are okay too.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by pipkinini on

I feel the hard work, and can see the trees. I feel the dedication to his plan. Thank you for sharing, very beautiful (:

Savannah

 

Submitted by pipkinini on

I feel the hard work, and can see the trees. I feel the dedication to his plan. Thank you for sharing, very beautiful (:

Savannah

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there pipkinini,

thank you so much for stopping by to read this poem.

Glad you could feel the dedication my dad put in.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jenny

It is fun to go into your back catelogue.  I enjoyed this bit about your Dad, and his dreams to make something good out of something bad.

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I just love it when people take the time to read some of my old pieces, it's also exciting for me to go back and read too. We were so lucky to have the woods at the back of the house, being able to walk out the back garden gate and play as a child was the best feeling. Dad worked so hard and put his all into every challenge, the glade was no exception, which was what I wanted to express.

Many thanks for reading Jean, and I'm so glad you enjoyed.

Jenny. smiley