DECISIONS

By Angela McCrimmon

Sat, 17 Mar 2018
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Maybe I will, Maybe I won't,

Maybe I do, Maybe I don't

Maybe the answer I'll never say,

Maybe I'll choose to walk away.

 

Maybe I know, Maybe I'll guess,

Maybe I care or couldn't care less,

Maybe I see much more than you do,

Maybe that's false or maybe it's true.

 

Maybe I laugh, Maybe I cry,

Maybe I'll live, Maybe I'll die,

Maybe I feel, Maybe I'm numb,

Maybe I'm fooling everyone.

 

Maybe I'll go, Maybe I'll stay,

Maybe I'll bow my head and pray,

Maybe I'll hide, Maybe I'll seek,

Maybe I'm strong, Maybe I'm weak.

 

Maybe I'm right, maybe I'm wrong,

Maybe I'm lost or maybe belong,

Maybe I'll have to learn how to choose,

Because maybe I'm not prepared to lose!

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I like the rhythm and rhyme, and making it have an element of humour, Angela.

Like the other one you've posted there's that deep down grit that knows one's worry and indecision, but will persevere and get on with what needs to be done! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Angela McCrimmon on

Thanks Rhiannon. Hope you're keeping well :-) 

Angela x

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Echoing Rhiannon's comment - you have a nice tight rhythm here Angela. This would sound good as a spoken piece too