Heart Songs ( Poetry Monthly

Cherry

By torscot

Sun, 18 Mar 2018
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apply no CPR  

or defibrillator

take this

heart of mine  

 

give to another

squeeze it  

please it 

make it sing 

 

songs full of joy 

let it hum along 

the notes are there 

the score within

 

each breath I take

slow and shallow

new tunes 

for one and all

 
Certificate PG
Poetry Monthly
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by torscot on

ECG image   ( my own ecg printout ) failed to upload.

Will try later

torscot

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

A lovely idea for Poetry Monthly. If we could donate our heart with its feelings and songs, how would we cultivate it?! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by torscot on

Thank you Rhiannonw

Perhaps this heart could sing loud and clear in a vast cathedral.   A song for a choir to join in with.

Kind regards

torscot

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

A good interpretation of the I.P., torscot. Many would rejoice at the organ donation and the chance of prolonging their life.

Best, Luigi

 

Submitted by torscot on

luigi ,  a thanks for commenting.  Perhaps you may share a Heart Song with us?

Regards

torscot

Submitted by Nolan on

Selfless. Beautiful &&

 

Submitted by torscot on

Hey Nolan. Thanks.  I have had a problem logging in due to a tech type problem.

I understand noo requires more entries. Maybe you can post one?

Regards.

torscot

Submitted by torscot on

And a very late thanks to the cherry picker.  The cherries look great in the snow.

Thankyou

torscot

Submitted by Nolan on

Will see what I can do! &&

 

Submitted by torscot on

Thank you Eds for including my heart tale in  "...If you’d like a reading treat, here are three to go back to..."

Regards

torscot