Monument



By london_calling79
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Son,
build a monument to us.
An eyesore.
Raw and exposed.
Bleeding,
pulsing,
tear the skin from it.
Sculpt the life in it.
Hew bare nerve and sinew.
Dig foundations deep,
sink concrete in rock,
and plant it, in our plain sight.
Let this monument be
your line in the sand.
Your Ozymandias.
We've watched you begin
to cleave each line with malice
for spite of us.
We'll never ask why
it turned out like this.
Son, build us an aberration.
An atrocity
and plant it proudly.
Pour in your cruelty
engrave the truth in clay and marble
to tell a truth to shame the devil.
Fill it with your baby breath
the steps you took and the ones we missed.
Be prone with it
because we hid from you.
Shape for it, a soft mouth
round red lips,
too thick
and the look
your look.
That's the symphony of it.
Carve out your own commandment
on our front lawn, dump it.
Be all that we weren't.
Be all that we couldn't.
If we can no longer parent
then let us be a blazing portent,
a wicker man.
We'll care for him;
two shuffling curators
in a derelict museum.
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A stop-you-in-your-tracks
A stop-you-in-your-tracks poem that gets better each time you read it. This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
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Damn this is so good. Will
Damn this is so good. Will want to read it a few more reads. That's always a good sign that you're on to something terrific. Cheers, Alex.
Rich
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not like any statues I know.
not like any statues I know. Monuments to truth rarely are.
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Gritty. Gorgeous. Gutteral.
Gritty. Gorgeous. Gutteral. Like raw meat shot with cupids arrow, a world made beautiful before doom. Thank you for provoking such feeling with few words, your powers should not be taken lightly.
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Good, wholesome poetry.
Good, wholesome poetry.
Our generation might end up being the one most reviled by its children since those records began. Worst parents since Laius and Jocasta.
Parson Thru
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This is our Poem of the Month
This is our Poem of the Month - Congratulations!
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The last line works for me..
The last line works for me...as does the whole poem. Gets you in the gut.
These days I rarely comment, but this is a worthy Poem of the Month.
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