Collaboration

Cherry

By bosch

Sat, 28 Apr 2018
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10 comments
 

A canvas attributed to both artist

And her three-year old, Clara.

Purple and orange across

The center in crayon.  "I only left

The room for a few seconds,

Came back, and Clara's beaming."

So, Not For Sale, Clara says

The swirls of color are unicorns--

Anything is possible--

Come out in pairs to graze at dusk.

Certificate U
Poem

Comments

Submitted by london_calling79 on

I can’t stop reading this. It’s gorgeous. Love the final, transcendental image.

 

Submitted by bosch on

london:  don't believe a comment could get any better, be more pleasing. thanks, Swep

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Lovely. You've written the innocence of the crayon into the poem.

Parson Thru

Submitted by bosch on

Parson:  you are a good reader, intuitive and imaginative. thanks, Swep

Submitted by w.w.j.abercrombie on

evocative imagery and flows nicely - enjoyed it

Submitted by bosch on

w,w,j,:  that's a good comment, thank you, Swep

Submitted by airyfairy on

Anything is indeed possible - sometimes we need children to remind us!  A wonderful image, innocent and knowing all at once.  

Submitted by bosch on

airyfairy:  and so this is what the comments on my poem have been missing i.e. a woman's touch. thank you, Swep

Submitted by Di_Hard on

 two seperate creativities and visions combined to make something magical for both? A child feeling equal in a grown up world, a grown up reminded of the wonder of being a child

 

Submitted by bosch on

Di:  that's a great comment. just read your comment again, you said it all. thanks for interacting with the poem, Swep