going extinct
By JupiterMoon
Mon, 16 Jul 2018
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going extinct
woken most mornings
by man-made growling
i struggle to understand
what kind of man
would put a fat exhaust
on a fiat panda
well done
for making desperate thunder
then i saw
the way your girlfriend walks to your house
hanging from the edge of her phone
by her nibbled fingertips
everlasting resignation
in her gait
and i realised
you’ve made raging thunder
because
you can’t make lightning
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A very well deserved golden
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A very well deserved golden cherry!
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Great vignette and sure
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Great vignette and sure-footed until the final realisation. 'Desperate thunder' is killer.
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