WHAT I SEE
By Richard L. Provencher
Sat, 03 Nov 2018
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from a sheltered porch
(as everyone
slumbers) is a sky of glittering
diamonds sifting through
shadows that linger
across layers of mountain green.
Mysterious is Nature
with secrets kept and sharing
its path of dreams.
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You've gathered your thoughts
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You've gathered your thoughts and come up with a lovely poem here Richard. I love the sense of mystery it portrays, especially in those lines:-
a sky of glittering diamonds
sifting through
shadows that linger.
Beautifully done.
Jenny.
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Two men look through
Two men look through the same bars, the one sees the mud, the other the stars.
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