Passion In Red

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Sat, 23 Mar 2019
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10 comments
 

Sexy, passionate red gives light

to those spicy ladies of the night,

subliminal crimson mantilla lace

lifts her spirits to another place,

 

cherry wax dissolving everywhere

as candle flame rises licks warm air,

she pours full bodied rich red wine

from bottle of claret that's so refined,

 

then diary upon her bedside table lays

where locked red velvet journal stays

memoirs of a stirring life she's owned

and all the fiery men she's ever known,

 

 

 

 

picture by pixabay free images.

 

 

 

 

 

Certificate 15
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Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Ah - so you chose red! Nice use of the IP Jenny!

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

The right colour for a scarlet woman, Jenny. Nicely done.

Luigi xx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Glad you liked my use of the I P insert and thank you so much for the lovely cherries, much appreciated.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you for reading Luigi, I'm glad I got it right and thank you for letting me know.

Jenny. xx

 

Submitted by celticman on

red is nature's way of advertising tooth and claw. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thanks for the read Jack and for sharing your thoughts.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

you have condensed a book's worth of character into these verses.

I really like that she has "owned" her life

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Jack's comment about the red of tooth and claw struck me, Jenny. I sensed the red of danger and short-lived excitement, rather than the red of loving faithful passion! Thought-provoking and well composed. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Wow! 'A book's worth of character,' that's so gratifying to know Di.

I hear the I P came from your poem, so it's great to know you enjoyed.

Many thanks for reading and your thoughts.

Jenny. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon, 

I'm glad you found this poem thought provoking. As you say there's two sides to the colour red, it can be loving and faithful but also dangerous and risky.

I suppose the idea of the riskier side just came to me first in this poem. Thank you for reading and your comment.

Jenny.