light’s linger-lapse of time

By MarciaMarcia

Sun, 22 Sep 2019
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“light’s linger-lapse of time”   

         by MarciaMarcia    (ip)

 

summered sensuous flora found 

hold bough laden scents abound 

in dappled sun warmed shades

a-blaze the day’s long drifting sway

in breezed light’s linger-lapse  of time ...held cast...make way

for leaf and petaled flower 

turned autumnal coda color

hued in purple-pink, cranberry blues to yellow greens at morning’s dew

while gingered orange glow transforms to ruby’s fired light

as sudden chilled October’s dawn

betrays each petal leaf at play

releasing hold they float beyond

in sway and swirling dance  

bound for where they next will lite

a-slumber....on their bed of night

 

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I liked the tumbling hues you've brought in, and the idea of 'linger-lapse of time'. And the 'sudden chilled October’s dawn' of which we have had a few tastes already. Evocative and concentrated. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by MarciaMarcia on

Thank you so much Rhiannonw, for your comment. It makes me feel the words are reaching and touching its readers 

Marcia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I so enjoyed your poem Marcia, youv'e captured the beauty of Autumn perfectly.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by MarciaMarcia on

Thank you Skinner_jennifer for commenting. a poem goes out into forever in hopes it will touch someone

and when it does touch...it lives. 
marcia 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I like your dreamy rhythm very much. The "linger-lapse" is so beautiful, makes me think of  leaf shadows and sunlight moving on the ground.

 

Submitted by MarciaMarcia on

Thanks so much Di_Hard. Oooo. I love to watch leaf shadows moving on the ground. Lovely.    Marcia