starlings

Gold cherry
Poem of the week

By Di_Hard

Thu, 31 Oct 2019
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19 comments
 

a dashing sky scatter

of black stars swirl, mass

spread, film fine specks

lead, loop, pass swoop

round; rain-sound wings

mimic the world's mind

 

 

 

(extra)

 

space sculpture

dark cache

unmesh

crescendos

slack, refurl, back

capture all

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Arn't those birds amazing with the designs they make in the sky? Like your poem with it's creative images, they are magnificent to watch and the most artistic birds when in flight.

I love the idea of them looking like a scatter of black stars swirling.

Nice one Di.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

this is beautiful Di - it's a wonderful sight isn't it - so fascinating. If you change your mind about reading anything, please read this one!

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Insert :0) And for the cherries!  It is amazing to see. I just stand in the road star(ling) gazing :0)

I'm sorry about the reading thing, I don't think I can as it is just too technical for me and I don't like bothering my partner all the time

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Jenny :0) The poem hasn't done them justice at all. I had a look online to see if anyone had written a poem about murmerations but couldn't find one. It is so amazing to see, there were only 20 or so last week, but every day about 4 o clock when they fly, a few more snatches come, from different directions, though I cannot hear that they make any vocal  noise. Though yesterday they did a little so maybe it has got big enough. But will have to be careful about looking up, as I thought it was raining, but what was splatting on the road was't rain! I am so excited, I have never seen a murmeration in real life before. Even tired children walking back after school look up from therir phones to see them! Do you have them where you live? I would love to read how you wrote about them

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

A lovely conveying of the smooth shape-changing spectacle! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Rhiannon! Your poem about swifts is such an inspiration to me, what I aspire to

Your comment is so beautiful. Have you written about starlings in all your vast and wondrous nature work?

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

What a beautiful, lyrical poem, Di, truly deserving of the cherries.
Thanks for sharing it.
I was struck by the coincidence of both of us writing about birds on the same day, yours on murmuration (starlings) and mine on wedge (geese).

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Luigi for taking the time to read and to leave such a kind comment. I have not seen your Geese poem, I will look, thankyou for letting me know about it. I bet I will learn something!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hello Di,

In the past, we've had what appears to be thousands of them flying, with more groups joining the throng right over our garden, but not lately here where I live, though I've started putting food out for the birds again, but can't say I've seen any...perhaps they're all over your end, smiley especially with your love of birds. wink

I still think your poem is a great tribute though.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Wow! Our murmeration is MUCH  smaller! This is the first year I have seen them, maybe you are right and it is a new destination? I didn't go for a walk today and my partner (as I was writing to you) told me he'd seen them flying past through the window and we went out and even though it is windy and wet today there are more than ever, like they are coming from the mainland specially. Shivering now!

I am so GLAD  you are feeding your birds again! I was thinking about you this morning seeing all the little goldfinches sheltering from the wind in our garden. It's great you can see all your birds again :0)

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Your poems are always so sensory. 

'a dashing sky scatter

of black stars swirl' 

'rain-sound wings'

Very lovely. :)

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Onemorething :0) It seems, with Luigi and me, your beautiful bird poems have started a bird thing!

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This is our Poem of the Week - Congratulations!

It's also our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Please share/retweet if you enjoyed it as much as I did.

Picture Credit:https://tinyurl.com/yypvuf3c

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

No Way! Thankyou so much! Wow! What a beutiful photo, too!

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

There are pages of amazing photos on flckr. Just put 'murmuration' into the search box and you'll see!

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Ooooooo I love that last line, Di. X

Great pick.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Parson :0) I am so glad you liked it I hope you are well?

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Very many congratulations on your achievement, Di. Wow, a double honour! It is so rewarding to see quality being appreciated. Well done.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Luigi, you are very kind. Your poem Geese is marvellous, I enjoyed reading very much