Love Two!

By Denzella

Fri, 13 Apr 2018
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Oh, Fiona, don’t cry.  You know I don’t like leaving you when you’re like this. You wanted a man in uniform, even though you knew the job would mean separation, and now you’re disappointed because I’m just a lift attendant but life is full of ups and downs.

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

made me chuckle - thank you Moya!

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Insert,

Glad it made you chuckle.

Moya

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Nice one Moya. Is there a real story behind this piece? I only ask because of the photo.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Jenny,

No, there is no story. This photo and another one I've put with The Collector are both my husband's family taken at different stages and I  have only just found them again.  I was very pleased about this because the one with The Collector was the last photo of the whole family that made it into adulthood along with Derek's Mum and Dad.  It was taken at our wedding and one of  Derek's sisters was dead six months later. so it has special significance.                                                                       

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Hi, Moyo, you really managed to squeeze such a number of puns into that brief offering! Had to stop and think them through slowly for my brain to catch up. Well done! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Rhiannon,

Thanks for the read and comment.  I'm just getting into the swing again on here.  

Moya x

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Good!