the in-between places

Gold cherry

By hoalarg1

Sun, 07 Jun 2020
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7 comments
 

Little left behind; little to lose
I set off at dawn
to the in-between places. 
I peeled away film layers of still waters
chose paths where time was absent
half worn by lost souls; or the found
I sat where birds sang loudest
stepped outside myself, made room
for silence to hide
I kicked off the moss
which had thickened thought to sleep
moulding me to the very order of thing.
And what I had forgotten, yet always knew,
broke rank, pierced through
this once table-top surface
sliding down from a morning star.

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

where silence is, is a good place to be. 

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

A beautiful poem, revealing more each time you read it.  This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!  Please do share/retweet if you enjoy it too.

hoalarg1 - I think the picture is from Wikimedia Commons?  Just checking it's copyright free.  

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you so much. Yes it's Wikipedia commons.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

this is wonderful - and I agree with airy, one to come back and reread. Congratulations on the well deserved pick

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you for your kind comments. I'm glad you liked it.

 

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

beautiful/magical piece, I liked 'chose paths where time is absent ' and 'thickened thought to sleep'. very talented

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you, Stephen. Glad you enjoyed it.