This year's walk...(08)

Gold cherry
Poem of the week

By littleditty

Sun, 14 Jun 2020
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Image: https://www.flickr.com/photos/rotwang/9450011675/

Certificate U
Poem
proseypoems
Historical Fiction

Comments

Submitted by celticman on

hail, spring indeed. 

 

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I really like this, in fact it's one of my favourite reads. Definitely a poem to be read out loud.

Well done and thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

 

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Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Prose poems are not easy to do but this is top notch, Nicky.

Cheers, Luigi x

 

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Submitted by onemorething on

I love the bombardment of this. Quite a walk. I enjoyed it very much. Has some great lines too, 'the sweat of labour, the sweat of love' just for one. Rachel :)

 

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Submitted by sean mcnulty on

This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.  Please share and retweet.

 

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

you took this reader on a wonderful journey with this - thank you!

 

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Submitted by Parson Thru on

Lovely stuff, littleditty. Really nice to read some prose poetry. Lovely images. Great pick.

Parson Thru

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Submitted by Ed Crane on

In fact it's lovely. I don't know much about prose poetry, but personally I found this a very beautiful prose recollection. The poetic descriptions are great, but it feels more like a prose to me.

Perhaps that is what prose poetry is, I don't really know. I need to look this up.

Well deserved golden fruit.  

Cheers

EdC

 

Submitted by littleditty on

Don't look anything up!! It's just a bit baggy to be called a poem - is all. It's when poems turn into prose, narrative - I was in another hemisphere so the seasons are as upside down as I was and all a muddle but it's what I remembered before a slumber - thanks for reading x

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

This wonderful journey is evocative and wakes all the senses - it's our poem of the week.  Well done!

Submitted by littleditty on

tips hat, nods, and nods off. Cheers! :)