Symphony Of Emotions

Gold cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 31 Dec 2020
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23 comments
 

When encountering sadness

violins that rain down like

a waterfall of tears cascading

in sympathy,

 

instinctively understanding

this essence from flutes

an expressive response

to sensitivity,

 

embracing concerns with

mixed moments so steadfast,

oboe born out of caring spirit

somewhat overwhelming,

 

wall of lamenting must come

down you brass section, hear

deep double bass in suspended

energy but not clenched like

winter's breath,

 

now smile at anticipated percussion

and woodwind...for they know drama,

a display of spring blossom embracing

flower scented dreams, reflecting nature's

sympathy of emotions.

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

What an interesting meditation on the effects of different instruments, and indicating how classical music can empathise with sadness, but also gently turn you to the brighter things that remain to enjoy. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

This is so clever, Jenny, and so evocative.  I always find the oboe one of the most haunting instruments, something both reassuring and mysterious.  

Very much enjoyed this.

Submitted by marandina on

An orchestral piece of prose. Nicely done :)

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I love the idea of violin sound raining down, also the suspended energy of deep double base,made me think of a great big lazy brass bright  lion :0)

You have given words to the qualities of these instruments' sounds like turning a crystal  to give a familiar side a new dimension

Happy New Year to you and your family Jenny, and thankyou for all your wonderful poems which I enjoy so much!

 

Submitted by celticman on

flower-scented dreams are usually a blessing (well, in my book) as this is. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there Rhiannon,

had a long think about this one after listening to some classical music. I'm so glad it worked. 

I appreciate you taking the time to read and your kind words.

Many thanks,

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi airyfairy,

I agree with you about the oboe, there is something quite haunting about this instrument, like it could take you to another place, another time.

The fact that you enjoyed reading, makes writing this poem even more special. Many thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hello Di,

it's always a pleasure to read your lovely comments. I never thought of the double bass like a big lion, but I can see where you're coming from.

Being a lover of crystals, I liked your analogy between instrument sounds, and crystals having familiar sides, but being offered different dimensions as they turn, this must have something to do with the sun catching those prisms of light. I think there is sound in most natural elements if only we look with our minds eye and concentrate very carefully.

A Happy New Year to you and yours too. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading and thank you for your comment.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jack,

yes I agree about flower scented dreams, It's nice to escape into our own world at night and they are such a blessing and so important at this time.

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and let me know you enjoyed, it's always a pleasure to hear from you.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Paul,

I'm always moved by classical music, it always conjures up emotions that can bring me to tears, or take me away to a happy place, which is how this poem came about. Glad you thought it was nicely done, because I fiddled with it many times before coming up with the finished product.

Thank you so much for reading and your great comment.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you very much for the cherries Editors, they were a pleasure to receive this New Year's day. Put a big smile on my face. smiley

Jenny.

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

This beautiful, original and powerful poem is our first Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day for 2021!  Please do share/retweet if you enjoy it too.  

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Congratulations once more, dear Jenny, for this melodic poem which was music to my ears. smiley

Luigi xx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Wow! Just come on abc tales and couldn't believe my eyes. Gold cherries are wonderful to receive and have made my New Year even more special. Thank you so much.

Jenny.smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you so much for your kind words Luigi. I'm very happy. smiley

Jenny. xx  

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Catching up - what a great pick to start the new year - congratulations Jenny!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Glad you liked insert and thank you for letting me know.

Happy New Year.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by hilary west on

Loved your musicality in this, Jenny. I felt I was in a symphony of dreams !

Happy New Year

Hilary   smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Hilary,

music is our favourite pass time at the moment as we play scrabble,  and it's such a companion to me and my partner.

I'm glad I could take you on a symphony of dreams with this poem. Capturing those musical memories is so important now.

Hope you are well and wishing you and yours a Happy New Year too.

Take care.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Hades502 on

I think the use of musical intruments to explain, or maybe represent, emotions was awesome. The words went very well together and I see why you got your gold cherries

GGHades502

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Many thanks for your kind words GGHades502. It's always a great feeling when your writing's appreciated.

Wishing you many hours of writing pleasure.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by jeand on

HI Jenny

This is a lovely poem, giving each instrument a job of conveying emotions. I do think music can calm you when you are upset, and uplift your spirits.

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Very true Jean. Where would we be without music? It can take you away to your own special memory or place.

Glad you liked and thank you for letting me know.

Jenny. smiley