love rages and sighs

By Nolan

Sat, 28 Aug 2021
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3 comments
 

banners fly onwards filled of faith
emerald and sapphire gentle peace
love rages and sighs a ruby's glow

heart of courage carries the torch
desert of pain scorches and flows
brave scarlet blood's fierce vigour

lonely eyes glitter of starry tears
heart sore and alone rain and rain
a ring of fire weeps joy and salt

whispers of music kisses adored
magic angel dust hope and truth 
mercy raining stars from heaven

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Poem
astral weeks
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Your writing is always musical! But I'm still wondering all that has prompted this one!

There seems the mixture of trouble and courage, mercy stars with the rain. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Thanks Rhiannon yes I can think the story could be a little confusing. It says what it says!

Thanks for your comment. Yes the line is courage and faith, pain and heartsore, loneliness, beauty and victory, gift and grace, hope! it makes sense. A journey. Thanks for the appreiciation of my more lyrical poems.

Nolan &&

 

 

Submitted by Nolan on

I have changed the title. It was "starry rain".

Sincerely yours! & Nolan