Snowballs in the Making
By Richard L. Provencher
Tue, 11 Jan 2022
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Tarry me not
as falling crystals
fill my facial-space
and I rush in hurried
motions
across a slide of
sidewalk ice
avoiding clusters
of people
also attempting
balancing acts
during this snowstorm
of slush & messy
condition as we
try to decide
to return home or not.
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great alliteration!
great alliteration!
"across a slide of
sidewalk ice"
your short lines work so well for this, has a real feel of thick snow falling
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