Imagine Focusing

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 21 Apr 2022
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6 comments
 

Sitting in garden with eyes shut tight,

breathing deeply while enjoying

meditating on a beautiful scene.

 

Tall mountains stand naked;

but for the glistening snow

topped peaks, looking down

upon gowns of green forest,

 

as I sit here on bank of lake,

reflections focusing on other

dimensions; images of soft

spirits speaking in gentle

tones,

 

drifting ripples; slow moving

shafts of light silently snaking

twisting curves, till moon casts

shadows on my enlightened

quest for serenity...in hush of

starry night.

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Comments

Submitted by marandina on

I think the first few lines set the scene perfectly on this visual, serene meditation. I was right there with you, Jenny. Paul :)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I've been trying to meditate each day for about 30 minutes, just letting my mind wander where it wants, it's amazing how quickly time flies, but the breathing helps, while listening to the birds sing, it's very tranquil, that's until the road works begin at the bottom of our road, but they usually finish by about 2pm, so I try and sit outside late afternoon.

I'm glad you enjoyed and I could take you to the mountains and lake. Thank you so much for letting me know.

Peace and Happiness to you.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jenny

I like the gowns of green forest and lots of the other visual details. Beautiful

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I'm so glad you grasped the gowns of green forest below the mountains, it felt right. If it felt visual as you read, then that pleases me too as it means I've managed to give a description of what I was seeing.

Thank you so much for the read and your thoughts.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

This is lovely Jenny, so peaceful and serene it must be wonderful as you descibe it here.

All the best, keep well! Tom

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

What a lovely comment Tom, it's good to know you captured the essence of this poem, and what I was trying to convey. You've put a big smile on my face. Many thanks. 

All the best and you keep well too. Peace and Happiness always.

Jenny. smiley