Age Cannot Wither Her
By Starfish Girl
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The vase had pride of place on the
highly polished table. A small lace cloth placed underneath to
protect the surface. The vase almost as old as her, purchased from an
antiques fair many years ago. Light reflected and refracted within
its many facets. It was kept for special occasions, this time her
birthday. She tried not to think about all those years, all the water
that had run under bridges during her life. Stormy, turbulent waters,
calm, placid, crystal clear waters and even almost dried up muddy
channels.
The vase, during its life with her,
had held a great number of celebratory blooms. Marking many occasions, births, marriages,
special times and sometimes just to provide a splash of colour to
lighten the room and the mood.
She carefully unwrapped the
flowers, her choice this time tulips. Each bloom furled upon itself,
hiding its secrets until the time was right. The colours vibrant and
glossy reflecting some of the light streaming through the window.
Carefully cutting each stem she placed them in the vase tweaking and
rearranging till they met with her approval.
They would last, they would
blossom, they would bloom. Creeping from their birth to their end of
life. She loved each of their stages, seeming to reflect her own
life. But she particularly liked their last stage when colours had
dulled and become subtle.
They clung on to life, had a great
beauty.
They remained in their antique vase
for as long as possible. Giving her pleasure at every stage of their
aging.
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Enjoyed the gently drawn
Enjoyed the gently drawn picture. Though at the end I wondered about the title, as their stages, seeming to reflect her own life.…liked their last stage when colours had dulled and become subtle. … had a great beauty.
Seems she sees herself withering, but still with beauty, the beauty of old age, and maybe learned wisdom and experience. ? But not 'withered away' I suppose! Rhiannon
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No, I think by the time I
No, I think by the time I finished writing the comment , I realised that you meant, not completely withered, and therefore the special beauty of aging. I didn't realise about the quote. I'm rather ignorant of literature, despite enjoying one quite severe lady who opened up some Shakespear amazingly to me at the time I was about 13! Rhiannon
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Very expressively written.
Very expressively written. The images are evocative which makes this an effective, short story. Enjoyed. Paul
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Hi Lindy
Hi Lindy
I loved this. And the idea that a vase holds one's history, and the enjoyment of each use, including the flowers that please as much if not more at their end - a beautiful thought.
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Lindy, this is fantastic!!
Lindy, this is fantastic!!
Truth, colour, flowers, time
It all flows and glows with beauty
xxRay
PS How is life in sunny Brum.?
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starfish
starfish
you show your vase to the world and their wife
lovely display
xxray
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