kaleidoscope

By Nolan

Thu, 01 Sep 2022
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every heartbeat poem of love
space dust and stars
fall into a kaleidoscope
tunnel of forget 
other side around you
wrapped in a moonbeam

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sparkling glitters astral sand
magical mystical fantasy
breath of starry visions
floating ice powder

image's shadow moon blue
glowing glimmering ghostly
faint breezes soothe softly
tranquil sigh and hush

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whispering shades of love
free flowing living joy
singing snug around you
touching hope and peace
dream of romance's
sweet embrace rose's blush
sleep tonight kisses alight
streams of calm slumber
peaceful placid serene
quietly sleep dear delight

~ ~ ¤ ~ ~

For Miranda
Spring Day
1 September 2022

Certificate U
Poem
astral weeks
Love

Comments

Submitted by Nolan on

Not so common these days a kaleidoscope was a popular instrument as a toy an optical device producing wonderful symmetries, consisting of mirrors that reflect images of splints and bits of grain brightly coloured glass in a symmetrical geometric design through a viewer. It is amazing. The design may be changed endlessly by rotating the section containing the loose fragments. The images are fascinating, the name means a form beautiful to view.

I might still do some editing & Nolan

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I loved the images in your poem Nolan, especially in that second stanza.

sparkling glitters astral sand

magical mystical fantasy

breath of starry visions

floating ice powder

Such a beautiful depiction reminded me of scrying, or reflections of being in tune with creative love.

Always enjoy magical mystical fantasy that takes you away from the everyday life.

Thank you for sharing.

Jenny. 

 

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Thank you Jenny for the kind comment! Always welcome & Nolan

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

We and our children have always enjoyed kaleidescope's very much, though difficult to get the very young children to look properly! Such a simple idea.

And it does seem a symbol of the way you seem to enjoy tumbling the pictures, images and metaphors into a soothing, calmiing and loving mix to surround. Glittering cheer and real hope and peace.

Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Thank you Rhiannon, perhaps I should look for a photo of a kaleidoscope! That would be nice hey?

Yes, magic and miracles. A sense of wonder.

Nolan &

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Yes, a photo would look nice!

I suppose I've always been a bit nervous of the word 'magic' associating it definitely with 'working with other powers' or conjourers' sleight-of-hand illusions, but I think you use it as a sense of wonder and excitment in life, glittery thrills! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Yes I am also careful with the word "magic" some people feel it is about supernatural and evil, I am glad you understand. Really not such a big deal. Your interpretation and description is excellent.ultimately a word says what it says, to the reader and the writer. There will always be misunderstandings.

Watching movies this one was the Hollow Man II. Good entertainment. See you then I'm pleased to be friends with you and your support on my writing.

Nolan &