Weather
By Richard L. Provencher
Thu, 12 Jan 2023
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brought chilly chat &
ice-slipping day
white crystals surrounding-
we ought to
dress warmly
breathe mist boldly-
& listen to those we love.
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Succinct and wise! Rhiannon
Succinct and wise! Rhiannon
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Oh, that's good!
Oh, that's good!
I must say I did wonder about 'breathing mist boldly' and was torn between the refreshing sharply cold fresh air being lovely to breath in deeply, and wondering at what point the air is so cold one has to be careful! Rhiannon
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