Waiting for Spring

Gold cherry

By Magnolia Fay

Mon, 13 Mar 2023
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Sitting here waiting

Waiting for spring

A sky the colour of dirty milk

Blankets the cityscape 

Skeletal grey

 

Our house, curated confectionery 

A dream in pastel

Life-saving orchids

Artful bastion against the gloom

Under siege

 

Bitter cold has bitten us with snow

This dirty laundry sky needs bleaching

One week until spring

I would like to paint triumphant landscapes on the windows

Or hibernate like smarter animals do

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Comments

Submitted by onemorething on

I think the anticipation in grey and cold just before Spring can make the arrival of Spring in blossom or warm sun on the face an emotional experience. Lovely ideas expressed in this around the wish for Spring. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. 

 

Submitted by Magnolia Fay on

I agree, after all absence makes the heart grow fonder. It's just that the closer we get, the more impatient I feel! :-D Thank you so much for the pick of the day! 

Magnolia Fay

Submitted by onemorething on

Loved the artwork too.

 

Submitted by Magnolia Fay on

I like to have fun with Canva sometimes. 

Magnolia Fay

Submitted by donignacio on

I especially like the humor in the final line. Great poem!

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Sometimes I think it would be so nice to live somewhere it was warm all year round, but nothing quite beats the rush of pleasure when spring happens does it? Mind you, the grey and cold seems interminable this year - you poem sums it all up beautifully. Congratulations on the well deserved golden cherries!

 

Submitted by celticman on

hiberantion is good, painting on windows is good too, just make sure they're your own.