Colour Drought

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 27 Jul 2023
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11 comments
 

Winter raw, sky is grey
all is covered with a white duvet,
with a robin’s breast a flame of red
and the holly bearing drops of blood.

[IP: include a colour, and animal and a fruit]

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Comments

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Very original Rhiannon! Clever! Tom

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Tom! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Another lovely IP response Rhiannon, thank you! New IP tomorrow!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you! I might squeeze another little one in first! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you for the cherries. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Turlough on

Another nice one Rhiannon.

Well done.

Turlough

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you! glad you enjoyed. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I love the idea of the snow being a white duvet. What a perfect winter scene you have painted with words Rhiannon. I just love the photo too.

Beautiful poem.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thank you, Jenny. I enjoyed capturing this little one, too! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by marandina on

"Winter raw, sky is grey

all is covered with a white duvet.."

 

Evocative and beautiful imagery, Rhiannon. Another lovely vignette. Paul 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Paul. A glimpse back to the time of waiting. Rhiannon