Rain in Kalgoorlie
By D G Moody
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I hear the screen door slam so
the cats out for the night while
In the sleepout I lie under the fan
that slowly stirs the limpid air.
I smoke another Chesterfield;
the house settles and contracts;
the dark is velvet with moths,
batting against the fly screens.
Then a cooling breeze arrives
bringing with it a smell of rain.
A white flash – close rumbles,
heralding the welcome arrival,
the smell of it on the red earth:
starting now as a patter upon
the iron roof, then a drumming
that comes – faster and faster:
the wet rods of drenching rain.
I stub out my last cigarette
and step out onto the veranda,
breath in the smell of sweet rain,
strip off my singlet and shorts
to walk out into the rain, and
letting it lash delicious onto my
dry receptive skin mouth and hair:
such precious rain in Australia,
that most precious element of all.
D G Moody 2023
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It is dark, cold and windy
It is dark, cold and windy here, so I loved this wonderful poem about a very different kind of Winter, and hope you will too. It's Pick of the Day. Please do share if you can
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Wonderful - you took me right
Wonderful - you took me right there - thank you - a quick break from this cold miserable winter's night
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Very evocative, to taste such
Very evocative, to taste such a different scenario, and a reminder of thankfulness for rain so needed as you said in the teaser. Rhiannon
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I loved this. The dark is
I loved this. The dark is velvet with moths...Great line. Some of these descriptions eg red earth are very familiar to me. The rain is such a double edged sword. Really enjoyed it.
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Stunning poem, Doug.
Stunning poem, Doug. Evocative and euphoric. Paul
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You've captured the
You've captured the conditions of the location with words perfectly. Where would we be without the rain? It's suchy a blessing to all the senses.
Great read.
Jenny.
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