First To Wake

By TheShyAssassin

Thu, 05 Oct 2023

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Still like death,

Except for breath.

I’d die but wake her now.

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sleep, don't weep.

Permalink Submitted by celticman on Thu, 2023-10-05 22:11

sleep, don't weep.

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a baby girl

Permalink Submitted by Nolan on Wed, 2024-06-12 16:36

I've always wanted rather a daughter a son would turn out too much like me. In this family the men are wild some drink a lot some fight a lot they're all trouble most of them are mad.

Lovely little poem Andy! Picture of peaceful. Bliss.

All the best & Nolan

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