Tales of the Unconnected
By Ewan
Wed, 13 Nov 2024
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A shaggy dog's story
about a seagull
and the shotgun
missing from the third act
backed in the USSR
you receiving me?
Deceiving me?
Believe in me!
Not all stories
are lies
and
not all lies
are untrue
confessions
I don't mind
------------------
matter
The erstwhile
is the first while
it lasts.
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I don't know where you're
I don't know where you're going with this, but hey, I like it, anyway.
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I like it too. All the lines
Permalink Submitted by Jane Hyphen on
I like it too. All the lines blurred and the connections made willy nilly, you can hang it together to make a story, anything goes these days and yours are always neat and arty.
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