iTwin
By iDrew
Tue, 27 Apr 2010
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iTwin
last night
i fell in love
with the aphex twin
and i felt the full emotion
of bleeps
and little squiggle noises
as a chord
i collected all the passion laced
expired breaths
tokens
for the dream archive
in the cupboard
(keepsakes
of special shiny things
a pressed dead daisy chain
a button
a kinder toy
old cinema tickets
the kiss i always wanted
from before we met)
last night i fell in love with
you
as you moved inside me
slowly
so
exquisitely slow
to goosebump my
skin
when we
laid down
with the aphex
twin
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Wow, I really like this
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Wow, I really like this Drew! The short-line structure really works and helps the poem flow - well done ;)
Magic xxx
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I really like your style.
Permalink Submitted by Anna Marie on
I really like your style. Every piece I've read so far speaks volumes. The lines flow marvelously.
x Anna
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