Thought train

By Kahdai

Thu, 09 Sep 2010
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When the train jolts across
my head bumps against glass
again find myself dozed off
look for a sign in the grass

Nothing out the window knows
how far away I feel from home
anything to tell me if am lost
until I can name the next stop

You would all be waiting for me
yet I was on another train now
a thought train stole my mind
time to leave my home behind
while you wait beside a bed
hoping I will find my head.

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on
a thought train stole my mind' Know the feeling very well.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
:) good! Thanks for commenting celticman K x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I too like your word play with 'train'. A clever poem that lots of people will be able to identify with. Well done;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thankyou for read & comment Tina! Glad you like it :) K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "