Morning Comes

By Edenfalls

Wed, 25 Jan 2012
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8 comments
 

Light was falling like rain
Slowly waking the morning dew
Making grass shimmer and shine
Like a kaleidoskope of joy
Taking shelter in morning new
Was a trickle of golden mist
Darkness now a distant memory
Light brings warmth to the dawn
Silence broken only by song
And a flutter of beating hearts
A new welcome for the earth
As the morning now breaks free.

Certificate U
Poem
Poetry For Everyone
Nature

Comments

Submitted by shyrewode on
Some great imagery here, particularly the ending.

 

Submitted by scratch on
The first line captured me and then it was a joy to be a prisoner.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Makes you want to get up and see, experience the hour for yourself. Thank you! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Edenfalls on
Thank you shyrewode, really glad you liked it.

Submitted by Edenfalls on
Hi Scratch, I was trying something new here and hoping it worked. Thanks for reading.

Submitted by Edenfalls on
Rhiannonw, kind words. Thanks very much.

Submitted by Denzella on
Hello Edenfalls, How do you write like that? The imagery is so good. Your words create beautiful pictures. Mine on the other hand conjure up a dirty washing, laundry basket! Really enjoyed reading this poem. Moya
 

Submitted by Edenfalls on
Denzella, lots of white wine helps!!!!!!!!! Thanks for reading.