Cos I Love You

By jolono

Tue, 14 Feb 2012
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Sometimes I act like I don't care
I may ignore you like you're just not there
But I always long to stroke your hair
Cos I love you.

I may snap and snarl and lose my cool
And shout at you like you're a fool
But you make me feel I'm ten foot tall
Cos I love you.

When we're going out and you're dressed in lace
And you ask "Is everything in place"
How I dearly want to kiss your face
Cos I love you.

If I forget our kiss as I close the door
And I've left all crumbs upon the floor
Please don't think that you'r my friend no more
Cos I love you.

So forgive me when I act unkind
What I want to say may not leave my mind
But you need to know you're my greatest find
Cos I love you.

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Comments

Submitted by sandyshores on
What lovely sentiments Jolono!

Submitted by jolono on
She's worth it!

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Just bootiful;-)

 

Submitted by jolono on
Thank you Tina.

 

Submitted by scratch on
Super jolono. Love in-spite of all our human frailties, something that we can all identify I think. Just a gentle nudge, correct the typo' penultimate line, penultimate stanza "you'r" to 'you're' ;-)

 

Submitted by jolono on
Thanks Scratch, already done. Must have read it 10 times and stil didn't see it!

 

Submitted by scratch on
They're so easy to miss those ones, I do it all the time:)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi jolono, what a wonderful valentines message, I bet your wife will be over the moon. Jenny.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Ah, nice one. None of this macho stuff, just tell her like it is. "...Cos I love you..."
ScoZen

Submitted by Denzella on
Very touching...a really nice sentiment. Moya
 

Submitted by jolono on
Thank you all. She did enjoy it!

 

Submitted by jolono on
Thanks Mels, completely forgot I wrote this! Been away for a few days, got loads to catch up with !

 

Submitted by mariamartha on
Beautiful! Mr. jolono Happy to be part of this Literature community. I congratulate him for Poems and Tales and thanks for the criticism that only make me grow in my literature. Greetings Literary. Mary Martha.

Submitted by mariamartha on
Beautiful! Mr. jolono Happy to be part of this Literature community. I congratulate him for Poems and Tales and thanks for the criticism that only make me grow in my literature. Greetings Literary. Mary Martha.

Submitted by jolono on
Thank you very much Maria, once again welcome!