Claire
By Parson Thru
Wed, 03 Apr 2013
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Claire,
do you remember that cigarette
on the wall
in the morning
in Chesterfield?
I do
And our goodbye
on the seat of the taxi
(God, how many of those have there been?)
You put your hand on mine
and I shook it
grimly
Protagonists parting
on the Trojan beach
I hope that life has been good to you
I hope that life has been good to you
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parson, this is so sad! I
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
parson, this is so sad! I really like the simplicity of the beginning and the end - I think the repetition works brilliantly there.
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Reminiscing- (I have spelt
Permalink Submitted by Highhat on
Reminiscing- (I have spelt that wrong?) but nice last line- repetition works fine for me too. Sometimes you want the old days back but remember the now you create- very happy if you want.
;)Pia
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Simple and beautiful. Your
Simple and beautiful. Your register seems endless Kev.
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