Steam
By lillylove406
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Rolling over,
Pinning her down,
Gazing up at him.
Smiling,
Laughing,
Kissing.
Kissing,
Turns into,
Biting.
Laughs,
Turn into,
Moans.
Shedding of clothes,
Oh,
The touch of his skin,
The taste of her lips.
Don't fight it,
He whispers through a smile,
She smirks back,
Pulling him closer.
Forces of love are strong,
Forces of attraction of even stronger.
Melt into him,
Give in.
Love her,
Please her.
Nails in his back.
Lips on her neck.
Screams echoing off the walls,
And steam clouding the window.
Love-making as good as anything,
As perfect as a dream,
As long as it's with-
-Him.
-Her.
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Lilly - I am delighted that
Lilly - I am delighted that you have written something happier this time Elsie
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Typo on the 'Forces of
Typo on the 'Forces of attraction' line. Some decent images throughout this poem, I liked it.
I have to say though, and don't care if I sound like an old fart, the best way to get feedback on your stuff is to read other people's stuff and comment on theirs.
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enjoyed this lillylove406
enjoyed this lillylove406 well done
take care
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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