will we be ugly
By mikilowe
Tue, 01 Apr 2014
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shall we become listless
drowsy and dull
like festering fruits on tables
tired little hums
winding down to silence
with stones ,in our guts
after we've vomited out our worlds
of wide eyed spring beauty
into metallic jugs and bottles
, forever until
ever,
will we be ugly, hauling
a pair of negligent
feet,
heavy as a thousand ships
ugly, dull and still hungry,
like fruit flies flying around
the neck of empty bottles
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Nice
Permalink Submitted by Jessiibear on
"of wide eyed spring beauty
into metallic jugs and bottles
, forever until
ever,"
And the very last line are possibly my favourites. I like the feel this gives me.
Great,
Jess
Jess
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