Mr Snake
By shades
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Oh Mr snake,
For goodness sake,
You ate the buns
And chocolate cake,
And all the pastries
That I baked
You ate before my eyes.
Oh Mr snake,
Oh deary me,
You emptied out
The pot of tea,
And look at this
I can’t believe
You’ve eaten all the pies.
Oh Mr Snake
You’re munching still,
You’ve eaten well
You’ve had your fill,
But I know you
You’ll eat until
There’s nothing left at all.
Oh Mr Snake
It’s such a shame,
You’re now so big
I’m not to blame.
The time has come
To change your name
I’ll call you Mr Ball
©RS2014
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You ate before my eyes (if I
You ate before my eyes (if I was being picky) implies that the cake was eaten then the eyes were the next dish. Maybe not.
Kids will love it I'm sure.
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Good rhythmic fun again. Don
Good rhythmic fun again. Don't think children will think about that line like that, but as you've used the word 'ate' already, I wondered, in view of the last stanza, about ' – you'll soon be such a size!'
Rhiannon
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