mummy I miss you

By Deliberately Evolving

Fri, 18 Sep 2015
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Mummy I miss you

 
Mummy I miss you
I saw you most days.
Nothing too exciting, 
just coffee, shopping
 
at Tesco's or in town.
A trip to a garden centre,
sometimes the pet shop,
or sit down with the dogs 
 
on the step drinking cider 
from porcelain mugs, eating
biscuits we shouldn't have
while my kids run around.
 
We talked and we talked 
about nothing and everything,
picking up conversations 
continued from before.
 
My children interrupted, 
were noisy and demanding
but you love them anyway
and we love you just the same.
 
Mummy I miss you, 
although it may not show
I think about you often
and I thought you should know.
 
It won't be long now mummy,
I look forward to the day
I'll pick you up in my car,
we'll go to Tesco and have
 
coffee from the coffee shop 
in mugs brought from home.
You'll be fine and I'll be fine,
there'll be no more concern.
 
My children will interrupt 
and be noisy and demanding 
but we'll talk and we'll talk 
and we won't mind at all.
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Comments

Submitted by VeraClark on

Very sad. I hope you and your mum get chance to spend time together soon.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Me too. I know she does too. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Still waiting? You must show her the poems when you see her again! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

It will be a while longer. She sees my poems though and we talk on the phone but it's not quite the same is it. 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Bee on

This is so sad and made me cry. I'm sure with good reason for temporary absence she feels the same and misses you for doing all the ordinary things. But the talking is good, all the same. Keep doing that till you are back together again. She'll love this poem as much as I do, I'm sure of that.

x

Bee

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

I'm sorry it made you cry Bee. It's not sad because there is lots to look forward to very soon and it won't be much longer now.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

A very moving piece!!

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Terry - it's not my best poem but it was written from the heart.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by alice sunderland on

this is a lovely piece to read. there's obviously more to it than i could know - but reading lines and in-between lines drew me in.