Niagara (Poetry Monthly)

By luigi_pagano

Fri, 04 Dec 2015
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Two dare devils lost their lives

in recent years

trying to conquer the Niagara

F
 A
   L
    L
     S

their only apparel
was a wooden  barrel.

They were

                      fools

attempting a feat

that could only end up in defeat.

________________________

© Luigi Pagano 2015

Certificate U
Poem
Are you being versed?
Humour

Comments

Submitted by catherine poarch on

You did really well with the visuals. I love this sort of thing. Have you ever seen the Gironimo Stilton children's books?

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Just a little ditty that gave me the scope to experiment further with visuals, Catherine.
I must confess I haven't seen the Gironimo Stilton children's books; my own children are grown ups and my grandson is only beginning to be interested in picture books.

Glad you found some value in my effort. Thanks.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Well, you've had fun there and sorted out how to get picture images in, and different fonts and colours – in which I haven't yet! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Not quite what I intended but it'll do for now.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

It looks as if you are having fun despite your frustrations, Luigi. Thrilled you've given this a go. 

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

In the end I manage to produce something but in my attempt to achieve good visuals I neglected the poetic side which in retrospect seems rather scant. Still I was glad to experiment with a new form.
I might have another go if I find the right inspiration. We'll see.

Thanks, Ray, for your feedback.
Luigi x