The Surgeon - (dedicated to my surgeon, Mr. Haneif - who was so kind)

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By Bee

Mon, 25 Apr 2016
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He guides us past the earth's drop

and catches us lightly

in a fall of stars;



flies us through a flare that sears 

bright through our hearts

at the thought of leaving.

He stands us up



at the foot of a hill

we think is a mountain, 

and in the grasp of a steady hand, 

we find ourselves

strong enough to make it 

to the summit -



breathless, but more alive 

than expected, with so many miles 

and a lifetime ahead,

still walking on solid ground.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Bee...I just wish you could me smiling and crying, both at the same time, but the smile is winning through. How could it not?  This wonderful poem is an inspiration to us all, no matter what obstacles lie ahead of us.

Sunshine winging its way to you as I writesmiley And that's a promise.

Tina

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Tina. The sunshine was lovely. X

Bee

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

How often doctors of skill also seem to have emotionally supportive skills and ability with communication also, which is extra-helpful, and encourages onward. Not that they can travel with us as a heavenly Father can, but all the human encouragement and help to make the most of the days, must be so appreciated. Much love, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

Too true. Thanks Rhiannon.

Bee

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

a really fine tribute

 

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Submitted by Bee on

I'm glad. Thanks insert. I want to dedicate my pamphlet to him and use this poem at the front. I just hope I can manage to be around to give it to him personally. He made me feel so brave when I most needed to. 

Bee

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

I hope he gets to read it.  Lovely tribute.

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Philip.

Bee

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

What a wonderful poem Bee, I too hope your Surgeon gets to read this.

I cannot begin to know what you've been through, but I really hope you can win this battle.

Take care and thinking of you with positive thoughts.

Jenny. 

 

Submitted by Bee on

You've stayed with me, Jenny, but I think there comes a time to relax and know your beat. 

Bee

Submitted by seashore on

So glad you have an empathetic surgeon Bee.  Lovely poem.  Very best wishes, Coral

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Coral. 

Bee

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Humbling that the focus of this the surgeon. Wonderful stuff Bee. x

Parson Thru

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks PT x

Bee

Submitted by VeraClark on

What a gift, what a man.

 

Submitted by Bee on

smileyyes

Bee

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Bee

What a lovely poem, and tribute to your surgeon.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Jean.

Bee

Submitted by Denzella on

Bee, As usual you are generous with your praise.  I have only read this quickly but I will return to read again.

Always in my thoughts,

Moya xx

 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Moya x

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

smiley for the cherries. X

Bee