The Essence of the Rose.
By Ladylily
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Tiers...perfumed tincture
of its central perfection,
a mystic beauty.
The maidens dance morn and noon,
faeries jive the pale-faced moon.
Rosa shines dusty gold
reflecting partners wild glow
a shy pixie’s globe,
sweet, spicy, lemon fragrance
Bliss-splendid taste of Heaven.
Heads...luxury crowns,
lusty virgins root and swell,
curling your leaves,
revealing tall quivering
butter-cream stamens.
Sway in Summer’s breeze
Flawless floret performance,
thorns scalpel defence,
each bud embroiders gay bloom...
Sculptured by Earth Mother’s hummms..
A trillion years pass...
your essence captured
in trickling streams of turquoise
Started off a a single Tanka....ended up as 4 Tankas, linked, with a little ending to finish it off.
Image of Rosa 'Julia Child' courtesy of Wikimedia Commons Public Domain image by 'Stickpen' USA.
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a trillion years is a long
a trillion years is a long time, but for a tanka it's a short hop. Evolution with no dilution.
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