27 Repetitions
By ankari
Sat, 11 Jul 2009
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Just 27 repetitions
And you can remember anything
Care to give an example?
Knowing someone's name is one...
And so why is it I,
Now, have memorised your name, so
Damn well? It confusing because,
Really I've only known you
Eleven seconds... and
Why is it my heart aches?
Perhaps it's the way your
Amusing voice
Replays your introduction in my head and that I
Know truthfully, somehow,
Eleven seconds have dissolved and in
Reality, I've loved you 27 repetitions long
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AH! I love your work and
Permalink Submitted by InspiredWriter on
AH! I love your work and poems. You're amazing at this.
Thats a really sweet, short poem that...has an effect that not many people can master...=))
xxxxInspiredWriter
Noah
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really like the way you
Permalink Submitted by maddie4848 on
really like the way you manage to convey so much in a short space.. well done!!
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