Haiku-2
By Basket case
Sat, 14 Feb 2015
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Letters come together, lying on the white paper, lining up to speak.
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Love how you've put this
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
Love how you've put this together in one line. They become the very letters you write about. Tiny and wonderful.
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This one line really leaves
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
This one line really leaves an impression.
I love the idea, too.
I don't really know much about haiku, other than what's come down from reading Jack Kerouac, who seemed to love it.
Parson Thru
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Nice. Like the way the
Permalink Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on
Nice. Like the way the letters - language itself - is brought to life and personified here, and the surprising visual imagery that this one conjured. Apologies for being a bit late to the comments game - randomly surfing ABC tales and finding stuff right now :)
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