Dusk

By Beeme

Mon, 14 Feb 2011
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8 comments
 

The skyline
is torn into strips
blue-orange-grey.
Throwing light
upon trees
-skeletal and charcoal black
elated against the horizon.
Demi-Gods congregating outside
with the luminous moon
golden moccasin white
casting her acidic glow.
I stir in the last streams
of black-blue light of dusk
my image melting in the shadows.

Certificate U
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Comments

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Hi Beeme, Have you just changed the ending? Love that golden moccasin white. Well done. :-)

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Yup just now Fatboy. I think thats my favourite image too :-] I'm really happy you enjoyed and I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and comment. It means a lot. Beeme xx

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Submitted by Highhat on
Very vividly described Beeme- liked the last 2 lines especially ;)Pia

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so much Pia, glad you enjoyed :] xx

k.

Submitted by seashore on
Agree with Pia, Beeme - particularly about the ending. xx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is so very beautiful, Beeme;) Well done. Tina xx

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you Seashore, glad you liked the ending, I worked hard on it :] Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so very much Tina, for your lovely comment. Your substained encouragement means a lot to me. Beeme xx

k.